From ff0bbcf13692f937b8028761aa693f7f16cb47c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jan Kuparinen Date: Mar 26 2021 07:16:38 +0000 Subject: Typo fixing --- diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/index.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/index.adoc index 7a2d2e4..a16cd93 100644 --- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/index.adoc +++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/index.adoc @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ image::Logo_server2.png[Server] [sidebar] **** -Creation Date: 2021-03-10 | Last update: N/A | Related Fedora Version(s): 33 +Creation Date: 2021-03-10 | Last update: 2021-03-26 | Related Fedora Version(s): 34 **** [NOTE] ==== @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Stay tuned. The results will soon be visible. - Please, tell us about your usage of Fedora Server - Tell us about problems you found and how you resolved it -- (Easy Contact opportunity ) +- (Easy Contact opportunity) == Where Else You Find Related Information diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-administration.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-administration.adoc index a55dbe2..b817fbc 100644 --- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-administration.adoc +++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-administration.adoc @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen [sidebar] **** -Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-03-10 | Last update: N/A | Related Fedora Version(s): 33 +Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-03-10 | Last update: 2021-03-26 | Related Fedora Version(s): 34 **** [NOTE] ==== @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ First Draft! Please comment on server mailing list == What You Find Here -Basic installation and system administration is covered by Fedora's overall Installation Guide (link) and System Administration Guide (link). But there are several of Fedora Server specific topics which are not included. There are such basic items as harddisk partitioning to more advanced security considerations up to virtualisation. +Basic installation and system administration is covered by Fedora's overall Installation Guide (link) and System Administration Guide (link). But there are several of Fedora Server specific topics which are not included. There are such basic items as hard disk partitioning to more advanced security considerations up to virtualization. == Basic System Installation (to be decided: alternatively: expand Fedora central Installation and System Administration Guides) @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Basic installation and system administration is covered by Fedora's overall Inst - What default partitioning does - Raid system -- Hard disk larger as 2 TB in Raid set ups +- Hard disk larger than 2 TB in Raid set-ups - UEFI boot === Networking @@ -31,12 +31,12 @@ Basic installation and system administration is covered by Fedora's overall Inst == Post Installation security enhancements - Installing fail2ban (short step-by-step installation guide the Fedora way) -- Disabling ssh password based login for all users but a small number of fallbacks (short guide how to do) +- Disabling ssh password based login for all users except some fallbacks (short guide how to do) - Protecting Cockpit password login -- Don't deactivate SELinux but resolve issues (link to cockpit SELinux page and description how to resolve on CLI (or link) ) +- Don't deactivate SELinux but resolve issues (link to cockpit SELinux page and description how to resolve on CLI (or link)) - Reduce the number of system users (If certain system users are required, move each (or all) to a lightweight system container, e.g. systemd-nspawn, or even a (semi-lightweight) Cloud Image VM) - Would be nice to offer some configurable Ansible scripts for those repetitive tasks (downloadable from server-wg home page) -- links to existing script at github system roles und a guide how to use that script for this purpose +- links to existing script at GitHub system roles and a guide how to use that script for this purpose == Specific System Administration Tasks diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-communicating.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-communicating.adoc index f73dad3..27e5fbe 100644 --- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-communicating.adoc +++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-communicating.adoc @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ For general troubleshooting help related to Fedora, please refer to link:https:/ If you found a bug, report it! * link:https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/quick-docs/howto-file-a-bug/[How to file a bug]. -* Issues about a server can be filed at link:https://pagure.io/fedora-server/issues[ticketing repository on Pagure]. +* Issues about a server can be filed at link:https://pagure.io/fedora-server/issues[the ticketing repository on Pagure]. * You can chat with us at link:https://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=#fedora-server[#fedora-server on irc.freenode.net]. diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-community.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-community.adoc index ab02f73..ffa39d2 100644 --- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-community.adoc +++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-community.adoc @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen [sidebar] **** -Creation Date: N/A | Last update: N/A | Related Fedora Version(s): 33 +Creation Date: 2021-03-09 | Last update: 2021-03-26 | Related Fedora Version(s): 34 **** [NOTE] ==== @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ First Collection of Ideas! Please comment on server mailing list ==== [TIP] ==== -Intended content: Basic information how work on Server is organiszed. In a first version probably just the most importent content of the Working Group and the SIG and a collection of annotated links to the most important information sources (WG wiki, SIG wiki, pagure, fedora calendar, anything else?) +Intended content: Basic information on how work on Server is organized. In a first version probably just the most important content of the Working Group and the SIG and a collection of annotated links to the most important information sources (WG wiki, SIG wiki, Pagure, Fedora calendar, anything else?) ==== diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-containers.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-containers.adoc index 31c0321..aa9c4f1 100644 --- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-containers.adoc +++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-containers.adoc @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen [sidebar] **** -Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: N/A | Last update: N/A | Related Fedora Version(s): 33 +Author: Peter Boy (pboy) | Creation Date: 2021-03-10 | Last update: 2021-03-26 | Related Fedora Version(s): 34 **** [NOTE] ==== @@ -41,30 +41,30 @@ Planned content: * application container * dependent on a Damon with ROOT privileges * huge trove of pre-built containers for all sorts of software -* no native support in Fedora Server, but a *vendor repository* maintained for Fedora +* no native support for Fedora Server, but a *vendor repository* maintained for Fedora == LXC (libvirt) * system container * support of container runtime based on kernel capabilities -* rough toolset support (requires to compose various xml files) +* rough toolset support (requires composing various xml files) * *natively supported by Fedora Server* (via libvirt as default virtualization tool) -== LXC (linuxcontainers) +== LXC (linux containers) -* systemcontainer +* system container * one of the first implementations of containers * system containers * originally base of Docker * complete toolset, container images, community * *natively supported by Fedora Server* (just LTS versions) -== LXD (linuxcontainers) +== LXD (linux containers) * system container * LXC with advanced toolset * not natively supported by Fedora, but a *COPR project* available -* *vendor support* for Fedory by third party packagemanager +* *vendor support* for Fedora by third party package manager == systemd-nspawn container diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-troubleshooting.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-troubleshooting.adoc index c0edae2..bd32880 100644 --- a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-troubleshooting.adoc +++ b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/server-troubleshooting.adoc @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Peter Boy; Jan Kuparinen [sidebar] **** -Author: Jan Kuparinen (copperi) | Creation Date: 2021-03-09 | Last update: N/A | Related Fedora Version(s): 33 +Author: Jan Kuparinen (copperi) | Creation Date: 2021-03-09 | Last update: 2021-03-26 | Related Fedora Version(s): 34 **** [NOTE] ==== @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ First Collection of Ideas! Please comment on server mailing list Some examples from the latest discussions -1. The well known BIOSboot partition issue +1. The well known BIOS boot partition issue 2. systemnd-oomd and httpd / jBoss/wildfly 3. UEFI – one ESP for /boot/efi requirement in software RAID 1 / RAID x @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ If you found a bug, report it! * link:https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/quick-docs/howto-file-a-bug/[How to file a bug]. -* Issues about a server can be filed at link:https://pagure.io/fedora-server/issues[ticketing repository on Pagure]. +* Issues about a server can be filed at link:https://pagure.io/fedora-server/issues[the ticketing repository on Pagure]. * You can chat with us at link:https://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=#fedora-server[#fedora-server on irc.freenode.net].