#44 changes made to landing page. I made the sentences in general shorter to read easier. I also tried to 'jazz up' the section of why to choose fedora server, adding some short takeaways in bold before the explanation.
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changes made to landing page. I made the sentences in general shorter to read easier. I also tried to 'jazz up' the section of why to choose fedora server, adding some short takeaways in bold before the explanation.

Missing a period at the end.

There is also the option to skip one release jump
Would "release cycle" sound better here ?

Looks good to me, made couple notes on possible fixes.

Thanks! Yes, "release cycle" is a lot better, it should be changed to that.

For the changes, should I make the changes on my fork and make a new pull request, or will someone else take care of them when merged?

Thanks! Yes, "release cycle" is a lot better, it should be changed to that.

For the changes, should I make the changes on my fork and make a new pull request, or will someone else take care of them when merged?

You should do changes yourself and push changes, it should automatically refresh this pull request.

Adopted all suggested changes into #45 along with other changes.

Close this PR since it was superseded by #45.

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